persuasive writing - Hazel

Oamaru 9400 Tuesday 18th august 2020 Dear Mum Dad, Ryan and Anna I am writing this letter, to tell you why I think you should let me and Ella build an underground tunnel leading from my house to hers. you may be wondering how this will work , but let me explain to you why it's an excellent idea! Sleepovers, no loud laughing, a break, quiet. Don't you think that sounds good? We will also fundraise and pay for it doing our favourite car washes! Firstly I often hear you guys complaining about how loud we laugh.Underground in the tunnel you won't be able to hear us. It will be so quiet. You also won't hear us going on about wanting to hangout and wanting to have sleepovers and what house it's going to be at. We can meet in the middle, have a bed there, and have sleepovers/hangout in there. It will save climbing over the fence! My rooms up high so I will have to walk out to the backyard. I'm thinking a door that sits on the ground in my backyard and when you open it up and there's stairs that lead to the middle. We will make it flat in the middle and a window up above the bed so we can watch the stars at night! So what are you going to get from this… well we will do the chores well you build it and all we need you to do is help us with a bit of the digging you could even teach us so we can do most of the work. We can do the decorating like painting and all that! It will be so much fun. In conclusion, I reckon we deserve something nice like this. We can share it with our siblings every now and again and even you and your friends. Ella also found that having a strong friendship makes you more happy so we could bond more and not be moody teenagers. wouldn't you like that? Yours sincerely Hazel