Thursday, March 19, 2020
100 word challenge
I jump as the toast flies out of the toaster. I grab a banana, it's the last one. Oh well I peel the skin back and find inside is a black old banana well what use is this going to do. I go to wash my hands and come back to find that the banana wasn't there anymore.
My brother jumps around the corner do you no where that banana went i ask him no…..ok i say he goes back to watch tv. I turn around and find the banana sitting back in the fruit bowl. I pick it up but it is too heavy. I keep pulling and I finally pick it up. It falls out of my hands and damages the floor. Oh gosh what a day that was.
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Hazel,
ReplyDeleteYour piece is quite a mystery. I like how your conversation mixed in well with the narration to help move your story along. Keep writing.
Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA
Thank you for your feedback :)
DeleteGreat story it is very creative.
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DeleteGreat story it is very creative:)
ReplyDeleteWow Hazel,
ReplyDeleteThat is a super creative story, what a day alright!
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Wow Hazel,
ReplyDeleteThat is a super creative story, what a day alright!
This was a really good story. Down below is a link to my blog.
From Brooke https://brookebayne20.edublogs.org/
wow this is such a great poem if you want you can check out my blog! https://manawa20.edublogs.org/2020/05/24/why-im-happy-lock-down-is-over-🎉/
ReplyDeleteThis is really nice I like how it all makes scene
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ReplyDeleteI can imagine that happening in my house.here is my link to my blog
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nice work Hazel I like how you use lots of words
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