Thursday, March 19, 2020

100 word challenge

I jump as the toast flies out of the toaster. I grab a banana, it's the last one. Oh well I peel the skin back and find inside is a black old banana well what use is this going to do. I go to wash my hands and come back to find that the banana wasn't there anymore. My brother jumps around the corner do you no where that banana went i ask him no…..ok i say he goes back to watch tv. I turn around and find the banana sitting back in the fruit bowl. I pick it up but it is too heavy. I keep pulling and I finally pick it up. It falls out of my hands and damages the floor. Oh gosh what a day that was.

11 comments:

  1. Hazel,
    Your piece is quite a mystery. I like how your conversation mixed in well with the narration to help move your story along. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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  2. Great story it is very creative.

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  3. Great story it is very creative:)

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  4. Wow Hazel,
    That is a super creative story, what a day alright!
    This was a really good story. DOwn below is a link to my blog.
    From Brooke https://brookebayne20.edublogs.org/

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  5. Wow Hazel,
    That is a super creative story, what a day alright!
    This was a really good story. Down below is a link to my blog.
    From Brooke https://brookebayne20.edublogs.org/

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  6. wow this is such a great poem if you want you can check out my blog! https://manawa20.edublogs.org/2020/05/24/why-im-happy-lock-down-is-over-🎉/

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  7. This is really nice I like how it all makes scene

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  8. Wow
    I can imagine that happening in my house.here is my link to my blog
    https://kenzie20.edublogs.org/wp-admin/index.php?page=msreader.php

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  9. nice work Hazel I like how you use lots of words

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